Pulling versus Pushing

Pulling versus Pushing

A few weeks ago, I mentioned changes were coming. If you are on social media with me or on CBAW’s mailing list, you’ve likely already seen it. If not, here’s a link to the announcement. It was difficult to write, and doesn’t contain the images that are etched in my memory about this long beautiful experience of discovery. In the past two weeks, as I’ve been doing the work under the CBAW umbrella (I literally turned in my ID card on Friday and then came back to do almost all of the same work the following Monday), it’s felt exactly the same and completely different. I’m trying to find the image that captures the difference between being weighed down by an institution I don’t believe in versus being responsible for carrying an organization that I believe in so fully. They are perhaps the same weight, but pulling something forward feels a lot better than pushing against something that is trying to crush me.

I think letting go of the story of pushing against is perhaps the thing I’m most looking forward to, the thing that I’ve focused in on this week. I had to tell that story honestly while I was living it; otherwise I’d be boiled alive by it. But now that’s over. I can rewrite this story from my own perspective, and the story I want to write is one of growth and possibility and all the incredible support this work has gotten from clinicians and participants and family members.

I read this poem by Jennifer S. Flescher in the February 2019 issue of Poetry Magazine and I loved it very much. I hope you do too.

Sisyphus and the Ant

The story tells us Sisyphus is being punished.
Over and over he has to push that boulder

up and up. The mountain and God glaring.
And you, you have

your avalanche of moods.
Pills the size of stars to nearly quell

cascade and tumult.
And still you step

gravity amplified by incline, each hazard
in the way of a boulder a reminder

it should be easier. There should be
a hot fudge sundae at the top. A long nap in the shade.

The story forgot to tell us, though, Sisyphus thrived.

He learned to guide his wrists
and shoulder girdles safely to protect himself.

And later he worked to safeguard every insect
from here to the crest. Considers this his calling.

Even as the sun and the weight of time bears down.
Your strength is kingly.

Your prompt: Consider the story you need to rewrite, shift perspective on. Could be one of the classics, or it might be some personal story that’s at a turning point. Begin with summing up the original, as Flescher does above, “The story tells us…” and then allow the poem to turn, the perspective to shift. You could signal the volta with something as simple as “But…” or “The rest of the story is…”

And, one of my favorite songs in the whole wide world. Turn it up and spin around if you need. I needed to many times this week.

 

2 Responses

  1. Sara K says:

    Shantideva,

    Pale smooth skin, not yet bearding
    At a scholarly retreat where expected to be a fledgling
    There a prince sat, the robes unbecoming

    They say: On him the teachings were failing.
    No signs of wisdom outwardly budding
    He, A taker of space, never giving
    They say he ate, slept and spent time shitting
    Perhaps it fitting
    He collected the group’s unbelonging

    unwanted and faulted
    he retreated to the mind
    leaving whispers of violence
    without a petulant reply

    Soon, came a day for a challenge was made
    Whispers of violence became loud voices of behest
    Climb a tower, give a teaching
    Only then can the prince stay
    Only stay meeting that specific request

    The prince
    with grace a challenge accepted
    and wishes obeyed
    The silent prince approaches his impossible seat
    And Suddenly a mountain down shrinks

    Now, With ease he perches
    giving words wisdom of kindness and love to all
    a precious new teaching revealed

    An audience entranced with his words cries for more
    but the prince flows away departing this earthly plane
    away to the sky, leaving no trace
    leaving only this a precious text for others to sustain
    the words of wisdom that only he could have explained.

  2. Jennifer Flescher says:

    And Pink Floyd is my favorite ❤️ You are brave!

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